LO2 Feedback

This is the feedback in which I received in terms of "LO2 Planning the Photoshoot", the positives and improvements. in terms of the positive of my blog I have; produced a well presented sketch plan which is insightful and detailed, excellent examination of camera settings in my practice shoot, a fantastic pitch presentation which is very detailed. But in terms of the pitch presentation some of the text is often hard to read because of the background, so the background may need to be changed and then the presentation can be scanned back in.

In terms of improvements needed for my project or things that I could do to add to my work; I could test out shutter speeds by photographing fast moving water (streams) or cars and then post the results onto my blog, and again another similar experiment with aperture sizes (f-stops) which can be contributed towards "Explanations of Shot Types." Also I mention double exposure a lot, I may need to try this out and experiment with it and post the results to the blog, and also the aspect of how I will achieve this effect, Photoshop or manually on the camera.

I have already created a blog post detailing how I will achieve the double exposure effect and which method I will be using, but in terms of what I need to work on; test out shutter speeds and test out aperture sizes.